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Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Lem on Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:45 am

Shadow Style: 100 Blades of Sorrow(1000, 10000)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C(B, A)

The User Expends A Large amount of Chakra to send the target into a Shadowy Realm. While in this Realm the Target is slashed, sliced, and stabbed with disembodied weapons of the user's style(if they know no weapon styles, then it is just basic Kunai). The weapons range from 100, 1000, and 10000 depending on the Rank used. The target
will feel no pain from these attacks but will be filled with the user's sorrow and fear, sapping their will to fight.

Effect: -1 to rolls for 1d6 rounds (-2 for 1000, and -3 for 10000) and an overwhelming need to escape from the battle.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Kisame on Thu Dec 25, 2008 12:13 pm

affraid SWEET. I think this series of genjutsu is somewhat neat... reminds me of swirling blades swarms from a PNP session I ran... lol... I miss my rokugan campaign now. So... lets see what we can do to make this leagle and in. I personally vote yes.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  jeric2052 on Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:37 pm

Being a Gen user myself I have come up with two alternate sand gens off of leafs that have been posted and added "Swirling Sands and Desert Wasps". This seems very interesting and needs the attention of the DMs to flush out more details. I do like the idea but this particular gen sounds like its also bordering shadow ninjutsu so possiblly also an elemntal genjustu at that for those that know shadow ninjutsu. I'm not quite sure that the step proccess would be of any use possible just select one because I do no see a Jounin teaching you a C rank that you can later turn into an A rank. Modifications made thru rp maybe creating different effects thru the process but still having the same effect. But for an Example I'm going to take what you came up with and run with it as a B rank example.

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~1000 Blades of Sorrow~
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
CP: 8
Special: Due to the complex nature of this Genjutsu two saves are made the initial "locked in" roll and secondary after "release"

The User expends a large amount of chakra to send the target into a shadowy realm stunning them and leaving them immoible. While in this realm the target is slashed, sliced, and stabbed with disembodied weapons of the user (if they were weilding no weapons during the fight, then it is just basic Kunai). The target will feel no pain from these attacks but will be filled with an immense feeling of fear, hindering their will to fight after enduring what seems hours of grueling punishment at the hands of the genjutsu.

1st Effect: The target suffers 1d6 chakra drain for 1d4 rounds
2nd Effect: Due to the fear effect of the torture effect of this genjutsu the target makes a secondary roll versus the user to see if the effects of the genjutsu leave the target startled and reluctant to continue the fight hindering them a -2 on rolls for 2 rounds after.


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now as I stated before this jutsu does have a "shadow" element sound to it so it is possible to limit this from being a widely used genjutsu to limit it to special training or only learnable by those of the Shadow Element. This is my suggestion and only a suggestion for Lem and the DMs it was Lems idea and I would expect his/her feedback on this idea before a dm apporves and adds to the genjutsu list.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Lem on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:09 pm

That actually sounds pretty good. Alot better then what I worded it with Very Happy It was intended to be Heerio's Special Attack, and with hir being Shadow Element, I intended said attack to be shadow based =3
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  jeric2052 on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:13 pm

Well I'll take that as an approval from Lem. But special attack or exclusive to you only I believe will require purchase by rp tokens or dm approval. But before that can be done I believe it has to be approved by the staff. I'll poke Anko this way hopefully and we'll see if we can get some other dms to sign off on it. Kisame liked your idea but my modifications may be different we'll need a second approval from him.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:22 pm

whats up with genjutsue and words like: kinfes,blades,peril,death,sorrow itc.?

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  jeric2052 on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:29 pm

Well genjutsu is used as a fear effect and also in instances to dissorient or confuse the enemy. Its more of a strategic use then just head long running into a battle if I can immoblize or dissorient an enemy nin in a two on one fight, me being the one, it allows me to handle the fight the way I want it by singling out one to face the other in one on one. But in the chances of one on one combat its just evil and can tip the course of a fight greatly in my favor even if I am greatly "out skilled" by who I am facing in taijutsu or ninjutsu. Some would call it cheap or a weak way of doing things but I call it my leverage for making the playing field equal or one sided in my favor.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:46 pm

ya but it makes all the names very dull and not really original

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Lem on Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:55 pm

I called it that, because it fills the target with saddness and fear, thus Blades of Sorrow
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Thu Dec 25, 2008 5:46 pm

nothing engiets the name it is axely one of the few of names that fit, im just lathing at people who make up moves that dont even have enything to do with fear and shitsz

ow and the fear part: you really never know how a person might react to fear for instenc umukaru instead of nicly stending there and not moving would go berserk and try to destroy the cause of the fear as fast as possible, while some one las might just make a run for it so rember to rp it outright as evry cher is difrent

here is a half quot from a nother server (dnd based:
you really never know it with intiminesion for exemple a itimitated/sceared dwarf would get angry and punch you and we all know that its a bad idea to get on the wrong side of a dwarfs ax, but while a dwarf would attack a hin (haffling) would moust likly retreat to put a bolt in yer back lator on.


it besekly says it all so be carfull when your seaing "the target is sceard" because difrent people will react difrently about it

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Kisame on Thu Dec 25, 2008 6:55 pm

Genjutsu is scarey... anyone not RPing as such is ignoring Kakashi when Itachi genjutsu'd him.... even Kakashi was moderately affraid... hence his eyes going wide.

Again... cool... original... *thumbs up*Good work.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Fri Dec 26, 2008 7:28 am

dude kakashi got nailed by the magneoku eny one would shit their pants if they got nailed by that, im just seing that difrent people act out difrently to difrent things

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Kisame on Fri Dec 26, 2008 9:07 am

What is a Mangekyo Sharingan technique? A genjutsu... just becuase it is "ZOMG PWNZORS" doesnt mean that its the only genjutsu that is scary... see.. I have an issue with people going "my character has NO fears" ... thats god modding, a form of powergaming, and if we see it.. refer to the Player Rules in the Information section... but this is totally off topic... lets get back on it.

Here are a couple I wrote up.

Name: Yukai Enjin Gojou (Happy Ring of Joy)
genjutsu
Rank: A
CP: 13
Descrip: The target is locked in an illusion of candy, sugar, kittens, and other happy things until they touch the things and then they become rotten food with worms crawling out of it, dead kittens that are animated and trying to bite them, and acidic lollis and other deadly stuff that most certainly isnt happy anymore.
PVP: The target is confused for 1d4 rounds or until hit. the target then while confused rolls a 1d6 (1-2 they stand there dazed, 3-4 they hit their allies with normal taijutsu (if none they drop 1d6/2 kunai or shurikens on the ground.), 5-6 they hit thier target)
They may not use genjutsu,ninjutsu, taijutsu combos or clan techs while confused. The target in addition takes -4 to defense rolls while confused.

Name: Deddo Hito Kyoukaku (Dead Man's Chest)
Rank: C
Descrip: the target would stumble into an illusion of a giant treasure chest.. but its alive and it swallows the target up and locks itself, while the target is in the illusion of the chest they are toutured by visions of ghouls, demons, and other hellish creatures.. thier energy draining away from them.
PVP: stuns the target for 1d4 rounds, draining 1d4 CP per turn. If the target is hit.. they are unstunned, but thier hair would be turning white... a few bright pale strands would be seen.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Lem on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:07 am

That's kinda vicious there Kisame xD
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Anko on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:14 am

I added 1000 blades to the genjutsu list.

DM Kisame wrote:What is a Mangekyo Sharingan technique? A genjutsu... just becuase it is "ZOMG PWNZORS" doesnt mean that its the only genjutsu that is scary... see.. I have an issue with people going "my character has NO fears" ... thats god modding, a form of powergaming, and if we see it.. refer to the Player Rules in the Information section... but this is totally off topic... lets get back on it.

Here are a couple I wrote up.

Name: Yukai Enjin Gojou (Happy Ring of Joy)
genjutsu
Rank: A
CP: 13
Descrip: The target is locked in an illusion of candy, sugar, kittens, and other happy things until they touch the things and then they become rotten food with worms crawling out of it, dead kittens that are animated and trying to bite them, and acidic lollis and other deadly stuff that most certainly isnt happy anymore.
PVP: The target is confused for 1d4 rounds or until hit. the target then while confused rolls a 1d6 (1-2 they stand there dazed, 3-4 they hit their allies with normal taijutsu (if none they drop 1d6/2 kunai or shurikens on the ground.), 5-6 they hit thier target)
They may not use genjutsu,ninjutsu, taijutsu combos or clan techs while confused. The target in addition takes -4 to defense rolls while confused.

Name: Deddo Hito Kyoukaku (Dead Man's Chest)
Rank: C
Descrip: the target would stumble into an illusion of a giant treasure chest.. but its alive and it swallows the target up and locks itself, while the target is in the illusion of the chest they are toutured by visions of ghouls, demons, and other hellish creatures.. thier energy draining away from them.
PVP: stuns the target for 1d4 rounds, draining 1d4 CP per turn. If the target is hit.. they are unstunned, but thier hair would be turning white... a few bright pale strands would be seen.

Happy...ring...of joy? Am I taking this one seriousley? o.O lol
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Kisame on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:21 am

Yes... take that one seriously... I was dead serious on its creation.. and Umu inspired me.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Avalon on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:27 am

lol i like it, they go with the goofy ninja
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:47 am

Kisame did i ever say my cher has no fear? no i sed how he reacts to fear, to tell the truth i myself go a bit crazy when im sceared but dose it mean im not sceared? no t means i am sceard, to put it basekly people effected by fear do things witch they would never do befre, wnat a exemple? a few months ego i was robed, it was two thugs that well moust people would take on no prob but it was 2 and they proboly had knifes, i wanted to start a fight with them but comon sens took the beter of me and i just headed over my cell phone (it all ended well) and im not seaing that i had no fear, hell i olmot pissed my pants i had no idea if the will just try to stab me after words, im steting a few facts and i never sed i will sey something like *i has no fear genutsue has no effect* im seaing how my cher would moust likly react, im not critisasing enything please dont get mad, just stating my opinion and that difrent people react difrently to fear........

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  umu on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:48 am

p.s grate jutsues Dale ^^

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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  jeric2052 on Fri Dec 26, 2008 1:09 pm

Well As much as this started out a post by lem for a genjutsu for her character I'll join Kisame and throw another sand gen that i've been tinkering with in my head. Now currently this is intended for my own personal jutsu and use at a later date I will think on if I wish for this to be a widely used jutsu but for the time being I would just like some feed back.


~Quicksand Grave~
Genjutsu
Rank: A
CP: 10

The ground at the targets feet quickly turns to quicksand holding them in place as the ground in front of them explodes upward in a wave of sand pushing them down into the pool where the normal instinct to flee kicks in. The sand seems more alive then sand nudging, shoving, and pulling down on the target away from the "top" for what seems several minutes before it becomes difficult to breath. Suddenly the users face appears to the target made of sand and speaks clearly "Just give up your going to die anyway." The target is then yanked thru the bottom of the pool into a clear open space falling towards what looks like a sand floor as the target nears the floor the ground shoots upwards into spikes of hardened sand. The target watches as they fall and are impaled on the spikes.

1st Effect: The target is stunned for 1d4 rounds
2nd Effect: On the last round of the genjutsu the targets mind and body manifest the implalement on the sand spikes causing them 1d10 points of damage. No physical evidence is seen but the targets body feels as if its had something thrust thru his/her chest.

Special note: Shaking or hitting the target only speeds up the genjutsu causing the target to feel they are being hit, shaken, or shoved more by the sand. Teammates attempting to awaken the vicitm are only able to do so safely by forcing their own chakra into the victim to disrupt the effects it is having on their mind.



Again this is my own personal jutsu I am working on. This is only posted here for opinions and positive criticism.
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Avalon on Fri Dec 26, 2008 1:27 pm

now thats a awesome genjutsu
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Lem on Fri Dec 26, 2008 1:49 pm

It's funny, this started as a topic for my genjustu, and now everyone's posting their own jutsus ^.^ It's makes me happy to think I started something =3
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  DM Anko on Fri Dec 26, 2008 7:45 pm

That last one posted...I'd have to say no to. That's more Ninjutsu...your just causing Ninjutsu effects with genjutsu description. Razz
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  jeric2052 on Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:08 pm

ok
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Re: Idea for a Genjutsu

Post  Feuerwelpe on Mon Dec 29, 2008 1:29 am

Here, to make it more genjutsu-esque
~Quicksand Grave~
Genjutsu
Rank: A
CP: 10

If succesfull, it appears to the victim that ground at the his/her feet has quickly turned to quicksand holding them in place as the ground in front of them explodes upward in a wave of sand pushing them down into the pool where the normal instinct to flee kicks in. The sand seems alive, nudging, shoving, and pulling down on the target away from the "top" for what seems several minutes before it becomes difficult to breath. Suddenly the users face appears to the target made of sand and speaks clearly "Just give up your going to die anyway." The target is then yanked through the bottom of the pool into a clear open space falling towards what looks like a sand floor as the target nears the floor the ground shoots upwards into spikes of hardened sand. The target watches as they fall and are impaled on the spikes.

1st Effect: The target is stunned for 1d4 rounds
2nd Effect: If the genjutsu wears off without being removed, The opponent believes the sand spikes have peirced them, causing them 1d10 points of CP damage. No physical evidence is seen but the targets body feels as if its had something thrust through his/her chest.

Special note: This technique is not ended if hit as the target is mentally thrust deeper into the mire with the physical pain, however, the stun duration is lowered by one per each time they take damage. If this causes the stun duration to be 0, it activates the second effect.
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