Jutsu/Genjutsu Ideas from me :3

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Jutsu/Genjutsu Ideas from me :3

Post  Shieo on Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:44 pm

Ok If I can I'm learning how to write good jutsus etc. so Ima use this place and you critic me!

I got two Genjutsu

Name: Shadow Style: Zetsumei yori Shi Kiwa (Death from four sides)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
CP: 10
Description: The user would use a fair bit of chakra and send the opponent to a pitch black room with four windows on each side with bright light, but none of it coming in, the opponent would see the windows getting bigger but are not getting bigger they are just closing in, after a few second they would get smaller and the opponenet would start to be squished they would feel the pain in the realm but in reality they aren't, They would feel the blood being squeezed out and bones, and organ crushed, till there is nothing left they would be sent back to reality stunned "thinking" that pain is still there but they are really alright
PVP: Roll con for 1d4 stun DC 20, -2 on all rolls after the stun, for 1d6 rounds
Requires: Chuunin Rank Only
(Yes even if I made it makes me shiver imagine it happening to you and tell me you didn't feel weird)

Name: Light Style: Nenshou Zetsumei Genkaku (Burning Death Illusion.)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
CP: 13
Description: The User would put out a fair bit of chakra to his/her opponenets direction. The opponent would be sent into a over bright realm, and would be over hot, In seconds four suns would appear in above, under, right, left from you and would have rays, and fire balls, shot right at you burning you're skin and flesh, everything it would then send you back to reality, keeping you're mind in excruciating pain as if it actually effected you.
PVP: Roll con 25 for recover of failed stun for 1d6 rounds , -3 to all rolls for 1d6 rounds
Requires: Jounin Rank

Enjoy


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Post  Avalon on Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:16 am

shadow one is creepier than hell, the light one is just mean XD I love em!
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Post  Shieo on Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:17 am

Wew :3
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Post  xninja on Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:13 am

Good Genjutsu
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Post  Shieo on Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:29 am

Thankyou ^_^
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Post  Shieo on Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:40 am

Everyone can post, DMs please leave comments thankyou ^_^
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Post  DM Kisame on Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:46 am

Very Happy ~thumbs up~
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Post  Dm Gaara on Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:41 pm

Creating Jutsu costs 25 tokens a Pop. looks good though. kthxbai
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Post  DM Kisame on Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:58 pm

Actually... Josh has a system for creation of jutsu/tokens it costs.. ^^ Ask him about it Gaara.
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Post  Shieo on Sun Dec 28, 2008 4:15 pm

I'll ask Josh >_<
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Post  Shieo on Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:23 pm

LOL I rolled perfectly for em but I need 20 tokens D: well death from four sides Im not jounin so I can't make the burning death
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Post  Shieo on Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:50 am

Well I hope I get one of them sooner than I expect since my crappy schedule and the times of the events It might take freaking months to get 16 tokens...
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