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New blodline idea

Post  umu on Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:21 pm

dont murder me for my spelling im doing my best
well i know that the blodline chozing is off at the moment but i desided to drop this in for later on.

Clan name: none know as all of the history of the clan has disapeared

abillity: Ash eye (dojutsue)

Apearenc: when activeted the eye starts to swirl and then turns to a halt and the eye becomes cat like (when there is a lot of sub that is so it besekly looks like a sharp oval) with a ash like patern around it.

Activating: 5cp/week
6cp normal
7cp strong
ceeping up: 3cp a tern for evry power level of the blodline

+s and -s

week: +1 to dex and wis -1 to str and int
normal: +2 for dex and wis -2 to str and int
Strong:+3 to dex and wis -5 to str and int
the users of the Ash eye are very fast and rather experienced with Ninjutsues but one of the side effects of using the eye is that the muscles become made much more for speed then streinght, also there seems to be a problem with learning and using genjutsue making it olmost impossible for the user to cast a genjutse on the oponent

oter abilites:
RP ones:
Ash evrywhere: once the user activeits the ahs eye evrything he sees is black gray or white once the user hits strong his abilites to see color get a bit broken making some things seems black white or gray to the user (exmp. very intans colors)
SKin: the skin becomes rather pale and after a few years the user cant just seem to get a san tan
Ash:while the dojutsue is aciteieted the user can crat ash out of enything that is on his body, he may even use his body to do so after the dojutsue is terned off the ash reterns to its former plac and shape unless its destroyed (when the ash is used out of a part of body then you need permission to destroy it)and can control it as long as the user can see it, this is also a bit PVP enhanced so drop it in there also

PVP:
Cat like reflex: with the cost of 5cp three times a battle the user can make his reflex doble or even triple making it easier to doge slower enemis
what it dose:when fighting a STR based enemy roll a 1d20 if you roll enything above a 10 for the next doge ONLY you add 2 to your roll if you roll below that you substruct 1
ASh sheld:
rank C (later on it can eveolve to ranks B and then A)
CP cost: 5cp (later on 10 and 15 if im not wrong)
what it dose: for two tern you can crate a sheld of ash aroun you making it hared for the enemy to hit you (-2 for attack rolls to enemy, this ability can be used agien only after at least 3 terns have passed)

other juteus:
havent thought of eny latly ill drop some in if i think eny out



BAck round:
The ASh eye users were first seen druing the first ninja war working as spys and assasins, their lack of streinght but lareg amount of speed make them perfect behind the enemy lines but useless on the battlefiled. The finder of the clan at the moment was called Honegate was known for his stelth skills and quick heand. After the war ended and the villiges were crated moust of the clan members travled to leaf but therey were known to be evrywhere. After a few year though moust of them left their villiges and creathed a villige near Konoha where they lived with peace with the woods and stuff like that.soon more wars came and all was not well as the member of the clan were forsed to fight egients eache other after part of them was captured by other villiges ad\nd the rest joined leaf.And very soon the clan was olmost compleatly whiped out. For years no one knew where the servivors were hidding intill that dredfull day when Umukaru was about one. A groupe of Ninja found and attacked their hiding place and killed agien moust of Clan members leaving only a few. Umukaru got out unhurt out of this masacure but when his other home was attacked something cracked in him and the blodline in him started to grow reviling itself.



right so now with some formalitys:
i would like thes blodline to cost 40 tokens at the max so if its too powerfull for that please tell me but also i wouldent want it to be below 25 so please tell me if its that low too so i can make it a bit more powerfull (if it gets aproved)



thanks


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Re: New blodline idea

Post  Feuerwelpe on Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:41 pm

Toss this into a pm, to a DM if you want to add it to the list of being considered after the stop of new bloodlines is gone


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Re: New blodline idea

Post  umu on Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:41 pm

THanks a lot ^^

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Post  Feuerwelpe on Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:42 pm

umu wrote:THanks a lot ^^
NP I can try and fix some spelling errors and such if you want.
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Post  Feuerwelpe on Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:46 pm

Clan name: Unnamed

abillity: Ash eye (dojutsu)

Apearenc: when activeted the eye starts to swirl and then turns to a halt and the eye becomes cat like (when there is a lot of sub that is so it besekly looks like a sharp oval) with a ash like patern around it.

Activating: 5cp/week
6cp normal
7cp strong
keeping up: 3cp a turn for every power level of the blodline

+s and -s

week: +1 to dex and wis -1 to str and int
normal: +2 for dex and wis -2 to str and int
Strong:+3 to dex and wis -5 to str and int
Users of the Ash eye are very fast and rather experienced with Ninjutsu but one of the side effects of using the eye is that the muscles become faster and weaker, and the mind has a problem working with genjutsu making it almost impossible for the strongest of them to cast a genjutsu on their opponent

other abilities:
RP ones:
Ash everywhere: once the user active the ash eye everything he sees is black gray or white once the user hits strong his abilities to see color get a bit broken making some things seems black white or gray to the user (example: very intense colors)
Skin: the skin becomes rather pale and after a few years the user cant just seem to get a sun tan
Ash:while the dojutsu is activated the user can create ash out of anything that is on his body, he may even use his body to do so after the dojutsu is turned off the ash returns to its former place, position and shape unless its destroyed (when the ash is used out of a part of body then you need permission to destroy it) and can control it as long as the user can see it, this is also a bit PVP enhanced so drop it in there also

PVP:
Cat like reflex: with the cost of 5cp three times a battle the user can make his reflex double or even triple making it easier to doge slower enemies
what it dose:when fighting a Strength attack roll, you may roll a 1d20 if you roll anything above a 10, for your next dodge, you may add 2 to your roll, however, if you roll below that you subtract 1
Ash shield:
rank C (later on it can evolve to ranks B and then A)
CP cost: 5cp (later on 10 and 15)
what it dose: for two tern you can crate a shield of ash around you making it hared for the enemy to hit you (-2 for attack rolls to enemy, this ability can be used again only after at least 3 terns have passed)


BAck round:
The ASh eye users were first seen during the first ninja war working as spies and assassins, their lack of strength but large amount of speed make them perfect behind the enemy lines but useless on the battlefield. The finder of the clan at the moment was called Honegate was known for his stealth skills and quick hand. After the war ended and the villages were crated moust of the clan members traveled to leaf but they were known to be everywhere. After a few year though most of them left their villages and created a village near Konoha where they lived with peace with the woods and stuff like that.soon more wars came and all was not well as the member of the clan were forced to fight against each other after part of them was captured by other villages and the rest joined leaf.And very soon the clan was almost completely wiped out. For years no one knew where the survivors were hiding untill that dreadful day when Umukaru was about one. A group of Ninja found and attacked their hiding place and killed again most of Clan members leaving only a few. Umukaru got out unhurt out of this massacre but when his other home was attacked something cracked in him and the bloodline in him started to grow reviling itself.



right so now with some formalities:
i would like this bloodline to cost 40 tokens at the max so if its too powerful for that please tell me but also i wouldn't want it to be below 25 so please tell me if its that low too so i can make it a bit more powerful (if it gets approved)



thanks


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