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Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Shino/Heart on Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:12 am

Name: Fighting Stance of the Bladed Mist
Rank: Err, Guessing that all together it would be like, B-A rank, but i'm thinking Genin=C Rank, Chunin=B-A Rank, and Jounin= A-S Rank.
Requires: Optional: Ninpou, Hidden Mist no Jutsu
Description: The user is trained i useing three swords at once, this requires emense concentration, and skill with these blades. The stance is where you weild one blade in each hand, then have a third special one, this one weapon is a specialy made verion of your specialized weapon, this has holes slong the ends of the blade, with small ahndles at each end, and a long balanced blade in the middle of the two handles. THe user basically, uses the holes and balance to balance, flip, and attakc with all three blades, fliping the third around and about himself and the eneemy to hit lightly in many places. The deired affect is that the first attack is to criple the oponent, so it makes it harder for them to get away formt eh next attacks, wich is one heavy blow from the second sword sicne the first was used to do the 'stuning?' hit, while the third blade spins in the air above, then the user is to catch the third blade with teh first blade, and follow suit to start fliping it and blanaceing it strait at the oponents face, this to, to do light damage, and cause blood to get int ehir eyes so they can't get away and attack abck as easily.

Because it takes so long to perfect, it requires jounin level to really be able to do this correctly, the qwhole style is also based souly on combo's, and hiting the first hit, then second, then third, if one fails int eh middle end, or beging, it must be all started over, aslo, it takes chakra to atain the correct amount of controll over the blades and balance needed for this, -5 cp, first hit, -5 cp, second hit, -3 cp last hit, if Ninpou, Hidden Msit no Jutsu is used, then it gives the user a +1 to rolls.

Rank 1:

Costs: Watever this would cost to begin with. (Genin,Chunin, Jounin)
Negatives: -2 to attack rolls
First Hit: this takes the user's turn, and if successful, does 1d6 dmg, and gives a -4 to defensive rolls for 4 turns, and -2 to attacking rolls for 4 turns.
Second Hit: This takes the user's turn as well, and if successful, deals 2d4 dmg, +2
Third Hit: This takes the user's turn as well, and if successful, deals 1d4 dmg, and gives a -2 to all rolls for 2 turns.

Rank 2:

Costs: 10 more tokens (Must be CHunin, Genin with DM Permission: oviously thats their choice)
Negatives: -1 to attack rolls
First Hit: This Takes the user's turn, and if sucessful, does 1d8 dmg, and -4 to defense rolls for 4 turns, and -2 to attack rolls for 4 turns
Second Hit: THis takes the user's turn, and if successful, deals 2d6 dmg, +2
THird Hit, This takes the user's turn, and if succesfful, deals 1d6 dmg, and gives a -2 to all rolls for 2 turns.

Rank 3:

Costs: 10 more tokens (Must be Jounin, or chunin with DM Permission:oviously, thats their choice)
Negatives: no minuses to rolls
First Hit: This takes the user's turn, and if successful deals 1d10 dmg, and -4 to defensive rolls for 4 turns, and -2 to attack rolls for 2 turns.
Second Hit: THis Takes the user's turn, and if successful, does 2d8 dmg, +2
Third Hit: This takes the user's turn, an if successful, it deals 1d4, +2 dmg and gives a -2 to all rolls for 2 turns.

(IF you are Jounin, AND you have DM permisison from Pat or Josh, then it cna be trained to others Razz)


if this'l be ok, then great ^^ if not, i'll re-try it ^^
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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Feuerwelpe on Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:27 pm

Coulda swore thardo had a idea like this, cept, it didn't kill genin/chunin to use.

Similar or better system, that incorporates tri-weilding as stance-based taijutsu... I kinda designed this one with thardo, Not sure what happened, Thardo probably didn't pm a dm about it or something

Tri-weilding(for lack of a better name)
c-rank stance based taijutsu(sharingan copyable)
cp cost: 5 plus 3 each turn after the first it's held up

RP fluff: The art of weilding three weapons is a tough trick to master, due to the fact most normal humans only have two arms. It varies from person to person how the third weapon is held, whether it is held in the mouth, attached to the back, or even held with a artificial limb. However it's held, a person using three weapons is a moving wrecking force usually.

PVP effect: gives you a third damage roll 2 ranks lower(For chunin, damage would be 1d10+1d6+1d4, Jounin: 2d8+1d10+1d6). You may use other taijutsu techniques while using this stance. Also your penalty on multi-weapon attacks is as if you did not have TWF, unless you have Improved Two weapon fighting.

Special: Only chunin knowing TWF can learn this technique

Quad-weilding
A-rank stance based taijutsu
CP cost: 13 +8 per turn activated

Fluff: Even deadlier then the art of weilding three weapons, users of four weapons generally use blades attached to the back of the leg to weaponize their legs, along with Blades attached to the wrists to make them roaming death machines to other martial artists.

PVP: The user gains two extra damage rolls, one at two ranks lower, and one at three ranks lower. Each hit deals 2d8+1d10+1d6+1d4 damage. They may also use taijutsu techniques able to be used with weapons. They are treated as if they had no TWF feats for the purposes of penalties. In addition, any time the user dodges or blocks taijutsu, (s)he deals 2d8 to the person attacking due to the weapons around their body nicking the enemy, deflecting a projectile back at them, etc.

Special: Requires Jounin rank, Imp TWF, and knows Triweilding.
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too bad

Post  DM Kabuto on Wed Jan 07, 2009 1:26 pm

It is a shame this is not up for use by players. Period.

Submit for vote by the DM team or I can remove it.

Thank you.

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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  DM Kisame on Wed Jan 07, 2009 1:43 pm

Triweilding? Lets... like... OP weapons just a little more? Seriously... weapon usage in the ninja world is rare. Mist ninja use them with the exception they aim to be Seven Swordsman... most other ninja use kunai or a single ninja-to.

Tri-Weilding is very... remniscent of Onepeice. (Zolo) ... so... what Kabuto said... submit stuff to DMs not players... thanks much.

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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Shieo on Wed Jan 07, 2009 1:53 pm

Yea I agree they are kind of OPed Chance has a longsword and rarely uses it unless it is needed She sticks with kunai and stuff Smile
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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Feuerwelpe on Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:07 pm

Yeah, I don't use a weap often either.

I only wanted criticism so that it gets optimized for non-OPness. Personally, if someone wants to submit as-is that crazy crap, go ahead. I will not. too much crazy-ness.
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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Dm Gaara on Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:25 pm

The point the DMs are trying to make. It is not the player's opinions that count in the creation of new systems.

We take -every- idea and submission into a long and drawn out process to make things fair and even. if you would like to suggest something, you may suggest it via PM to any of the DM staff. Basically, What are trying to say is.


You. Player.

We. Dm

Player Plays.

Dm Dms.

Enjoy the sanity of playing, and let us deal with this stuff Wink
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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Feuerwelpe on Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:38 pm

Well, figured if I let it be open discussion, since -I- wouldn't use it with my current char, someone would modify and submit it.
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O.O;;

Post  Shino/Heart on Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:59 pm

Ok, just tomake this clear, i did NOT mean to start anything up... this was meant to be used insted of a custom weapon for Kanju, and i jsut was setting it here forplayersto look at,and MD's to look at, it was jsut a rough idea i thought would be cool sinceit fit how Knaju is the berserk, uncaring, killing machine x.x again, sry i brought it upand just delete itsince it causes os much trouble plz..:/ i'll just use what tokens i have and make a remake and have wf in greatsword like every other misty... again, sry for the trouble x.x
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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  DM Kisame on Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:26 pm

Or dual weild... Raiga of the Seven Swordsman used dual longswords... mind you they were custom blades, but it would still fit the style.

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Re: Custom Jutsu/FIghting Stance

Post  Shino/Heart on Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:39 am

I may ^^:; i'm ganna work on trying to make an actual custom Jutsu, i'll just get two cutom swords eventually.. hopefully... XD
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